My bright eyes are always hiding things,
You should be careful what you read there,
I know you'll find me quite enticing,
For I was designed as such to snare.
Be warned that my smile hides fangs,
You should know I have wicked claws,
I could tear you to pieces so easily,
You could say it's one of my many flaws.
You must remember that you're delicate,
You should be careful where you tread,
When it is I that ends your life,
I hope you'll remember what I said.
I don't intend to harm you,
I hold no malicious intent my dear,
But you see this is what I am,
I'm the monster you're supposed to fear.
You can say that I'm your friend,
Bu
I finally finished outlining all of the races that are going to be in my NaNoWriMo story. Wanted to post it up here for one just to make sure I have it online in case anything crazy happens to my backups. Also I wanted to share because I'm rather proud of them so far ^-^
Eveden- closest to human. Typically live separate from the other races. Some intermingling done in smaller cities. Must be spirit-touched to use magic.
Capitol City: Verough. Operates under the rule of a group of Legislators. The capitol building is in the center of the city, the legislators houses surround this building. The whole city is built in a circle around the capit
So, my mom minored in English, and she's a little better than me at catching the more technical grammar mistakes. So she is proof reading Heartless for me to make sure we get as many mistakes out as possible before I try to submit it to a publishing company. Before she actually started reading she would go on and on about how she couldn't believe I would write a story so dark. Now she admits that she likes it. I CANNOT wait for her to get to the Fear torture scene in chapter... 40 something? Anyway, I'm going to laugh so much. So, so much. Come on mom, in fourth grade I wrote horror stories about werewolves and vampires killing me and my frie