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Does it growl like some angered creature?
Does it have eyes like hellfire?
Do its claws and fangs drip blood?
Does it lurk at night under the full moon?
Does it dwell beneath the beds of sleeping children?
Or is it something more subtle?
Something more everyday?
Is it the snide remark that cuts?
Is it the darkness that look back at us in the mirror?
Is it the shadow on our hearts?
Is it hate?
Indifference?
Sarcasm?
Cruelty?
Does it drive a gun to fire?
A Knife to stab?
A fist to curl?
Or is it even something,
That we can define?
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darkestAdventure Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013   Photographer
I love this poem! It's really cool!
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Soulless-Love Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Student Writer
:D thanks, it was just an idea that come to me when I was sketching.
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fromoblivion Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
Now this is a story, all about how my life got flip-turned upside down. Now I'd like to take a minute, just sit right there; I'll tell you how I became prince of a town called Bel-Air.
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Soulless-Love Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Student Writer
West Philadelphia born and raised, on the playground is how I spent most of my days.
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fromoblivion Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
Chillin' out, relaxin', actin' all cool, shooting some b-ball outside the school!
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Soulless-Love Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Student Writer
This is the most amusing non-related comment ever.
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katyspuppy Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
a true monster is something that has evil in its heart and nothing else.
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WereMagi Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Not sure if stupid or trying to be funny...
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katyspuppy Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
neather. a monster is something that just has pure evil in its heart and wants nothing but blood and destruction. im not trying to be funny. there really is true evil in this world and that is one of the discriptions of it.
y do you think im trying to be funny or stupid?
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WereMagi Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lack of grammar, punctuation and answering a rhetorical question.
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katyspuppy Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
its not like we are in school man. grammer dont have to be perfect. and i was feeling optamistic. i wanted to answer it.
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WereMagi Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I'm pretty sure the author would not like the question to be answered. This is a thought provoking piece and should not have to be answered for the answer something you are mean't to take away from this with you, not left for others to see nor in such a poor manner.

And besides, grammar, and spelling, should be used at all times for effective communication and a lends words and sentences greater meaning
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katyspuppy Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
i wouldnt call the question answered. there are many answers and variations to questions. and as for the grammer...... i dont like people correcting my grammer. there is nothing wrong with the way i speak. if you want to correct people become a teacher.
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WereMagi Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
... I have nothing to say to such stupidity. Good day sir.
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WereMagi Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh god, I screwed up. I blame this headache.
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